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Stuck, lost, confused
twisted inside my own heart
painful thoughts run over and over through my head

I feel as though i want to cry,
but i fear my own weakness to cry.

I stare blankly into thin air,
searching for a way out of this pain,
praying there is an easy solution
just waiting,
waiting...

"I'm stuck," i keep saying.
my mind straining looking for an answer:
none come to thought.

Still frozen from the shock,
I lay down and close my eyes...
©2008-2010 ~bulldogtia
:iconbulldogtia:

Author's Comments

this is the poem i submitted 2 tht contest thingy back in early May^^
ACCEPTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =D =D =D =D wow!!!!!!!!! im so incredibly happy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^ =D =D

i really like it even though its not about romance, but it does involve andrew. once apon a time, pat (one of my best buds evr) got really pissed at Andrew while me and andrew were still dating, and i was really stuck, lost, confused... u get the picture. i know the ending soounds like i died, but it was late at night and i went 2 sleep =b

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:) its good :)

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:iconbulldogtia:
thnx^^ i really hope it gets accepted =D

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:heart: "So breathe in so deep,
Breathe me in;
I'm yours to keep" :heart:
-Secondhand Serenede (Fall For You)

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:iconlegitzu:
this is really beautiful.
thanks for the favs and comments!
:thanks:
:iconbulldogtia:
yw^^

ty!!! =D it means a lot tht someone w/ such talent would like my poem^^

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:heart: "So breathe in so deep,
Breathe me in;
I'm yours to keep" :heart:
-Secondhand Serenede (Fall For You)

also known as: ~Ms-MMH
~TwilightObsessed member!!!^^
:iconms-mmh:
its good =)
definetly one of your best =)
and you say mine are depressing!!! =p

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"Well, maybe it is a bit early for me to, proclaim my love for you" -Ben (Secret Life) :heart:
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also known as ~bulldogtia
:iconbulldogtia:
hehe... :P

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:heart: "So breathe in so deep,
Breathe me in;
I'm yours to keep" :heart:
-Secondhand Serenede (Fall For You)

also known as: ~Ms-MMH
~TwilightObsessed member!!!^^
:iconsironaselkie:
Great job expressing your emotions. I love it.
:iconbulldogtia:
Thank you :hug:

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